Emily's 5 Fan Fiction links

Soul Eater ~ Grinning Moon~

Synopsis:
The two main characters Soul (boy) and Maka (girl) are talking about why the Moon grins as it does in their world. Soul told Maka that’s because the moon always has something worth while to smile about – such as a small happiness in their regular life. For Soul, that happiness would be the presence of Make in his life. And it is the same way that Maka thinks about Soul.

Critique:

The author didn’t use phrases such as “I love you” directly in the article, but the conversation between the two characters has expressed how they think about each other. It leaves some spaces for the reader to ponder the characters emotion and leaves the reader to find out the answer themselves. It is a short but cute story that makes soul eater fan smiles after reading it.

Soul Eater ~ When Maka is hurt ~

Synopsis:
Maka (girl) was injured badly and no one was allowed to see her. It makes Soul (boy) very upset and he can’t sleep at night. Maka keeps calling Soul’s name from time to time even she’s unconscious, so Professor Stein decided to let Soul accompany her. Soul stayed with Maka and keeps talking to her. After two weeks, when Soul said “I love you”, Maka woke up and replied “I love you too”.     

Critique:

The good point of this fanfic is that it attracts the reader with a surprising setting at the beginning, and makes the reader curious about the story. However, the author is not good at punctuation, and has many spelling mistakes, which makes the story unable to read smoothly sometimes.

Hyouka ~ The Second Law of Thermodynamics ~

Synopsis:
Satoshi teases Houtarou, a less-than-energetic boy, using the Second Law of Thermodynamics. Satoshi explained to Houtarou that because of entropy, in billions of year’s time, human might evolve to a completely different intelligent life which will revolve their entire existence around conserving energy. Conserving energy is what Houtarou tried to do every day, therefore Satoshi laughs at Houtarou that he’s the precursor of those intelligent lives.

Critique:

An interesting story which uses a physics term, and relates it to character’s personality. The author has interpreted characters’ temperament well, as explaining some particular terms and teasing Houtarou is what Satoshi usually does in the original series.

Hyouka ~ artificial flower ~

Synopsis:
Mayaka tries to attract Satoshi, the boy she’s in love with since middle school, by dressing up in a flamboyant fashion. Therefore, Mayaka is disappointed when Satoshi says those red ribbons and accessories don’t suit her. However, what Satoshi means is that Mayaka looks prettier without those meaningless accessories. And it makes Mayaka blushes.

Critique:

The author is good at describing character’s appearance and emotion. For example, one of the sentences used to describe Mayaka’s fashion is “Red ribbons occupied her head as her short coffee-colored hair was pulled back into a messy bun.” It makes the reader very easy to image how Mayaka looks like. However, this fanfic seems a bit out of character, since Mayaka is not really the type of girl who would do so.

Gundam Seed ~ Eternity ~

Synopsis:
The author fantasized the life of Cagalli (girl) and Athrun (boy) two years after the original series. In this fanfic, Cagalli married to Athurn, and Lacus married to Kira. One day, when Cagalli and Athrun woke up, they talked about their past that they used to be an enemies, friends, and then lovers. And they’re surprised at how life could be unpredictable since Athurn’s ex-fiancé is now his sister-in-law.

Critique:

The background setting of this fanfic is good, but the fanfic itself is not very attractive. I think the author is trying to describe the sweet life of the two main characters. However, it would be better if the author describes more about their facial expression or gesture, in order to portray their happy life.

Yasmin's final fan fiction

Aladdin fanfiction

Living under the rule of the sultan?! What a load of baloney. I should be the sultan not the silly advisory, after all I am the great Jaffar. Only then would I show the repulsive peasants of Agrabah what a sultan really is. Powerful.

Lago my sidekick parrot annoys me to the point where I'd want to feed him to my guards. But I keep him because he too hates the sultan and believes that I should rule Agrabah. Plus he makes a decent spy.

After many sleepless nights of frustrating thinking, I have come with two ways I can gain the sultans place and take over. One would have to be finding the right person that can enter the cave of wonders and bring me the lamp. The second option would be to convince the stupid, pea-brained sultan to speak to his snooty, arrogant, egotistical daughter to marry me so I could inherit the throne! Of course there was one itsy bitsy problem with this idea. 

My thoughts were interrupted by one of my guards coming to tell me that they have caught "him". I knew exactly who they were talking about, the street rat, the trouble of Agrabah the key to the cave of wonders, Aladdin That poor orphan boy doesn't know what's coming to him, at least now he'll be off the streets and won't be causing trouble, nobody will miss him and his loss won't matter to anyone.

Being a dark wizard I transformed myself into an old man and entered the prisons where Aladdin was held, after I played my act, the idiot was convinced to help me enter the cave of wonders in exchange for his freedom and some of the treasure. Yeah right! I'll be making sure that he never sees the light of day again.

I lead the fool to the cave of wonders. Before he entered he was warned – Don’t touch anything other than the lamp. I knew he wouldn’t be able to keep his greedy hands off the gold and treasure of the cave, but even if he did, I was in a win-win situation. Either Aladdin returns with the lamp or the cave collapses on him for disobeying the strict regulations of entering the cave.

I slept well that night knowing that the street rat would no longer concern me or get in my way. I knew that Jasmine had the hots for me but how could I convince the sultan to pick me.

I decided that the best way to win Jasmine was to get her to fall in love with me. That way she could deal with the Sultan while I sit back and watch the show. I knew that Jasmine always gets her way.

I went out that night to look for her. Lago had done his job and figured out where she goes. 9PM every Saturday, at the dock. She’s usually with her friends, chilling in the lounge. How could I get her alone, her full attention. I arrived at the docks and spotted her immediately. I walked up confidently and said hi. She looked disappointed to see me and I knew why. She must have heard about Aladdin.

“We need to talk,” she said, and she grabbed my hand and led me outside. It was a winter’s night and her hair blew viciously in the wind.

“What’s this about?”

“You know what it’s about! Aladdin! Where is he? Do you know how valuable he is?”

Wait what? Did she just call Aladdin valuable? What is she talking about?

“What do you mean?”

“Aladdin has access to the Genie! The Genie would basically do anything for Aladdin! Whatever Aladdin wants, Aladdin will get! I had it all planned, he was going to be used to my advantage. But now he’s gone!”

I stayed silent for a few minutes. Wow. Jasmine sure was something. If only I had known she was as evil as I.

“I…..I didn’t know,” I finally managed to spit out.

“Well now you do. Stay out of my way Jaffar. This is my land, and I have it under control.”

And with that she was gone.

A whirlwind of emotions suddenly took over. I was angry; nobody has ever spoken to me like that! Yet I was now even more intrigued by Jasmine. I hadn’t seen that side of her and had honestly believed that she had fallen for Aladdin a few months back. She was a beautiful and powerful woman. I had underestimated her, and now I was even more determined to make her mine.

I followed her back inside but knew to keep my distance. She was a princess, and could have me removed from the lounge in a heartbeat. I ordered a drink and watched her, and began plotting a new plan. I was determined, by the end of the week, she would be mine. 

Yasmin's fan fiction draft

For my fan fiction I'm thinking about basing my writing on the story of Disney's Aladdin.
I have two ideas, the first one is to write a post-aladdin story, from Jafars point of view. For those who aren't familiar with the story, Jafar is the villain of the story who ends up getting locked in the lamp. There has been a movie already made called "The Return of Jafar" that talks about how Jafar plans his revenge on Aladdin but I'm thinking of a different version of this where Jafar actually succeeds in killing/hurting Aladdin. It would be a more modern version that supports the idea that money can buy happiness and puts Aladdin "the street rat" back in his place. Maybe have the genie betray Aladdin for a reward presented to him from Jafar or something along those lines.

My other idea is also based in the future of the original story, but instead of using Jafar's point of view i would use the genie and write about what he does after being free from being locked in a lamp. Maybe he learns that he still holds the power of a genie and can grant a limitless amount of wishes to whoever he wants - this eventually gets him into trouble because the villain of the story (thinking about turning Jasmine into the deceiving villain) would want to hold him against his will to grant their destructive wishes. Aladdin would have something to do with Jasmine's evil plot and together they take over the land.

My fanfiction will be more modern than the original.

That's all i can think of right now. So far i'm leaning towards the second idea just because i think that having Jasmine as the villain would be more interesting.
Please let me know what you think is a better or more interesting story for my fan fiction and any additional ideas you have .. Thanks ! :-)

Emily's Fan Fiction Draft

Original Series

Hyouka

Setting of my fan fiction:

The main characters will be the 4 members of Kamiyama High School’s Classic Literature Club, Houtarou Oreki, Eru Chitanda, Satoshi Fukube, Mayaka Ibara. One day, an incident happened at Handidraft club which Satoshi belongs to. Houtarou and others will help him solving the case. In my fan fiction, I’ll introduce 1 or 2 original characters.

Point of view: 3^rd person

Charaters:

Houtarou Oreki

A less-than-energetic boy who doesn't particularly like to do anything that involves effort. However, if given something to think about, he will see it through until it is solved and then manages to make brilliantly logical deductions. His “gray life” has being changing since he joined the Clssic Literature Club.

Eru Chitanda

A curious girl who likes saying “I’m curious!”. Whenever a mystery is brought to her, she won't be able to stop thinking about it until it is solved. She is also polite and kind.

Satoshi Fukube

A boy who has really good memory and knows lots of things which may not be very useful in daily life. He calls himself “database”, and can almost always be seen smiling. He’s also a member of Handicraft club.

Mayaka Ibara

She’s a conscientious girl who’s strict to herself and people around her. She’s good friends with Eru Chitanda, and has crush on Satoshi Fukube since middle school.

I'm sorry, but my draft is about 2000 words....

Please read it ONLY if you're intrested.

 ~ COLORFUL ~

Satoshi Fukube had been acting weird these two days.

He used to smile all the time and his school life was always too colurful, so that Houtarou called it a “shocking pink” life. However, now, he’s “gray”. Same color as Houtarou Oreki, a less-than-energetic boy who didn’t want his school life to have any extra excitement.

Houtarou was thinking about the unusual behavior of Satoshi while he was sitting in Classic Literature Club room, and waiting for the other 3 members. Houtarou was a 1^st year student at KAMIYAMA High School. He’s motto was “Don’t bother doing things you don’t have to do, and just rush through things you have to do”.

The door of Classics Club room opened, and two girls, Eru Chitanda and Mayaca Ibara came in.

“Houtarou......” Mayaka hesitated. “May I… ask you… for a favor…?”

Hourtarou turned his face to Mayaka. He thought he knew what Mayaka was going to ask about. She’d had feelings for Satoshi since middle school, and she wouldn’t ask for Houtarou’s help unless she’s desperate.

She’s worried about Satoshi.

Houtarou didn’t say anything. Maytaka took the silence as his cue to continue.

“It’s about Fuku-chan,” Mayaka increased her voice a bit. “Something happened at Handicraft Club, I think that’s why Fuku-chan is not like himself these two days!”

“Oreki-san” said Chitanda in her soft and clear voice. “There were 3 models, which will be entered to a competition next week, were found broken in the Handicraft Club room. The other members suspect Fukube-san did it, because he’s the last one to leave the room and locked the door on that day. And……”

“But that’s not true!” Mayaka interrupted. “We all know Fuku-chan is not the kind of person who would do something like that!”

“……”

While Houtarou tried to say something, He saw Satoshi was standing behind the girls.

“Thank you, Mayaka.” Satoshi smiled and looked at the other 3 Classics Club members. “It seems you all heard about the incident happened at the Handicraft Club.” He paused for a while.

“But… I’m fine. Those malicious gossips will go away with time, since they also don’t have evidence I did it. ”He shrugged, feigning nonchalance. “So, don’t worry about me……”

“No!” Mayaka shouted. “Let us help you!” She’s a bit angry because Satoshi didn’t seem to care about himself.

“That’s right! We have to find the truth!” Chitanda leaned forward towards Satoshi, and looked straight into his eyes. “I’m curious!”

Satoshi was a bit surprised at the girls’ reaction, and he could’t think of anything to say.

“If Satoshi didn’t do it.” Houtarou finally spoke a word in a long time. “It could be someone else broke the models by accident, or …….. did it on purpose.”

This time, Satoshi gaped.

“Are you going to help me with this, Houtarou? Where did your energy conservation motto go!?”

Houtarou rolled his eye on Satoshi. “If I don’t help you, Chitanda and Ibara won’t stop bothering me until I say yes anyway.” said Houtarou in a lazy voice. “Can someone tell me the detail?”

“Alright” Satoshi smiled at Houtarou, as he’s saying “Thank you” to Houtarou. “Let me go through the whole incident.”

“It was on Monday afternoon, the members of Handicraft Club have finished making the models for next week’s competition, and I was the last one to leave the room.”

“We don’t usually lock the door for the club room, but that day, I thought I should lock it just in case someone else comes in and break the models by mistake.”

“The next day, on Tuesday morning, when the club leader used a key to open the door, 3 models were already broken. The 3 models belong to the club leader, another 1^st year boy called Yuuya Hamada, and me. That’s all I know.”

“Then,” said Houtarou. “I think we should talk with the club leader.”

===========================

The 4 people went to the Handicraft Club and Satoshi introduced them to the club leader.

“Fukube…I believe you didn’t do it, but the other members are….” The club leader felt sorry for Satoshi.

“It’s alright” Satoshi smiled. “We are here to find the truth, can you tell us about what you saw on Tuesday morning?”

“Sure, I’m happy to.” The club leader replied. “As all the club members know, I’m always the first one to come to the Handicraft Club room in the morning. On Tuesday morning, I came to the club room as usual and found the door was locked, so I went to the staff room upstairs to get the key. And after I opened the door, I found my model was broken, so did Fukube and Hamada’s.”

“You didn’t see anyone else?” Chitanda’s curiosity was getting fired up.

“No. But after 10 minutes, Hamada came to the club room because he wanted to modify his model. And he got very upset when he saw it’s broken.”

“Then why the member suspect Fuku-chan!” said Mayaka a bit impatiently.

“Er…..That’s because when I asked who lock the door on Monday afternoon. Hamada told me that he’s the last but one to leave, and Fubuke told Hamada he’s gonna stay longer and will lock the door when he leave. ”  

Houtarou asked, “Club leader, is there anything unusual happened in that morning?”

“No….I don’t think so. Maybe just that, I took the music room’s key instead of Handicraft Club room key for the first time, so I have to go to the staff room upstairs again and get the correct key.” The club leader laughed at himself for being careless.

“Wrong key……” whispered Houtarou.

“Oh, that,” Satoshi explained. “The Handicraft Club room’s key and music room’s key are both kept in the staff room, and they’re hanged next to each other. The two keys look very similar, so students took the wrong key carelessly time to time. ”

“I see.” Houtarou pondered for a while and started to squiggle his fringe. That’s the look he gave when he had some sorts of deduction. Then he said, “Club leader, we would like to talk to Yuuya Hamada as well, do you know where he is?”

“He hasn’t come to the club room yet, so I think he’s still in his class room.”

“Thank you very much for answering our questions.” Chitanda bowed and said it politely.

Then they headed to Yuuya Hamada’s classroom.

============================

“Sorry to bother you, Hamada-san” said Chitanda.“We would like to ask about the incident happened in the Handicraft room, if you don’t mind.”

“Sure! Please ask me anything!” Hamada seemed to be a happy, bright and breezy freshman, and he gave Chitanda a big smile.

Houtarou looked at Hamada’s big smile and asked “Do you usually go to Handicraft Club room in the morning?”  

“Ha?” Hamada seemed didn’t expect about the question, but he still answered it with a big smile.“No, I never been to the Club room in the morning until this Monday, I just wanted to modify my model a bit. So I was really upset when I see my model was broken.”

“Even if you are the one broke the models?” said Houtarou calmly.

“ ! ? ! ? ”

Suddenly everyone looked at Houtarou, but no word was coming out their mouth.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.”After a while, Hamada finally squeezed few words out from his mouth. His big smile has already disappeared. “Fukebe is the one locked the door, and there is no one went in or out the club room, until the club leader unlocked the door next morning!”

“No, you went into the room before the club leader came.”

The other 3 Classics members kept quiet, they didn’t want to interrupt Houtarou.

“You went to the Handicraft club with the key before the club leader arrived, and locked the door from inside, then broke the models. You’ve placed the music room’s key where Handicraft Club room’s key is usually hung beforehand. So even if the club leader came earlier than you expected, he has to go back to the staff room upstairs to get the correct key after he couldn’t open the door with the key he had. The club leader didn’t take the music room’s key by mistake, he just took the key which was already replaced by you.”

“You were inside the Handicraft club room when the club leader was trying to open the door with the wrong key, so after he headed to the staff room upstairs, you just ran to the staff room using the stairs on the other side. Then you hung the Handicraft club room’s key to its right place before the club leader arrived at the staff room.”

Houtarou took a deep breath after he spoken so much words.

“Is it just that simple?” asked Satoshi. He’s surprised with the simple method that he didn’t know if it could be called a trick.

“Yes, it is simple.” replied Houtarou. “It’s simple because I think the person didn’t have much time to think about a complicated trick. Satoshi, you said the Handicraft club doesn’t usually lock the door, right? Which means only the person who knows the door has been locked can do it, which is you, Hamada, aren’t you?” Houtarou looked at Hamada.

Hamada took a deep breath, and then sighed. “Is that all?” A smile returned on his face.

“You just admitted you’ve never been to the Handicraft club room in the morning except that day. I don’t think it’s a coincident. If a person caused an incident, he must be curious about it and want to go back to the scene. Don’t you think?” Hourarou asked Hamada in reply.

“Ahahaha” Hamada suddenly started laughing. “It seems what I heard about you guys are true.”

“I’ve heard some rumors about the Classic Literature club that you guys are good at solving mystery, and I wanted to know realness of the rumor” Hamada looked at Houtarou and smiled peculiarly. “And it seems the rumor is true.”

Before Mayaka tried to accuse Hamada for being nonsense, Satoshi disrupted.

“It’s alright that you destroyed my models.” His voice had never been this deep and cold, and he spoke with deliberation. “But giving trouble to other members of Handicraft club and my friends, is NOT FORGIVABLE.”

All Classics members and Hamada were surprised and froze for a second, they didn’t expect to hear this kind of warning from the boy who almost always be seen smiling.

Satoshi continued.”If you do it again……”

“SORRY! I’m so sorry about what I’ve done!” Hamada seemed finally realized who he had pissed off and he didn’t want rest of his school life to get miserable. “I’ll make confession to the club leader and tell him I’m the one break the models, so please forgive me this time…” He bowed deeply to beg Satoshi for forgiveness.

Satoshi looked at other Classics member for a second, and then he said to Hamada. “Just for this time!”

“Thank you! I’ll make sure I won’t cause trouble to other people, if I want to challenge the Classic Club next time” He ran away as soon as he said it in a cheerful voice.

Houtarou and Satoshi looked at each other, and shrugged helplessly.

“Is there gonna be next time…..?”

 =======  3 days later  =======

On the way to Classic Literature Club.

Mayaka caught up with Satashi and asked him how was Hamada after that.

“He told the club leader that he broke the models by ACCIDENT. And he’s helping us with fixing the models. I think the club leader and the other member will forgive him since they don’t know the truth.”

“But is that alright with you, Fuku chan?” Mayaka was still worried about Satoshi.

Satoshi pondered for a while.

“I think he’s not that bad after all. He’s just, you may say, too naughty” Satoshi shrugged his shoulder. “He’s really conscientious when he’s fixing the models.”

“We all have different sides. We all have some dark, evil side in us, but at the same time, we also have bright and good sides. Humans are COLORFUL, aren’t we?” Satoshi said it in his usual big smile.

While they were talking, they arrived at Classics club. Houtarou and Chitana were reading books as usual.

Satoshi walked towards Houtarou. “Houtarou, I want to thank you for helping me. But can I ask why you helped me this time? Because it’s against your energy-conserving motto, isn’t it?”

Howtarou looked at Chitanda, and replied Satoshi “You know why.”

“Besides” He continued. “Your weirdness makes me feel uncomfortable. I want you to go back to your “shocking pink” life, so that I can continue with my “gray” life as usual.” Houtarou said it a bit coyly.

“I see, Houtarou.” Satashi smirked.

Satoshi looked at Houtarou, Chitanda and Mayaka, and said it with a very big smile.

“Thank you for all of you!”

“I’m very happy to have you all as my friends!”

END

Emily's Final Fan Fiction

~ COLORFUL ~

Satoshi Fukube had been acting weird these two days.

He used to smile all the time and his school life was always too colorful, so that Houtarou called it a “shocking pink” life. However, now, he’s “gray”. Same color as Houtarou Oreki, a less-than-energetic boy who didn’t want his school life to have any extra excitement.

That’s why he decided to help Satoshi with the incident that happened at Handicraft Club, Houtarou told himself, it’s NOT because of the big eyed girl who’s looking at him right now with some sort of expectation.  

“Oreki-san, I’m curious about the incident!” Eru Chitanda leaned forward towards Houtarou and repeated her words.

This time, even Mayaka Ibara was forcing Houtarou to help Satoshi, because she’s worried about Satoshi.

Therefore, Houtarou had no choice but to go against his “conserve my energies” motto.

============================

The incident happened 2 days ago.

On Tuesday morning, the Handicraft club’s leader, who always came to the club the earliest, arrived and found the door was locked. They didn’t usually lock the club room, so he had to go to staff room upstairs to get the key. However, he wasn’t able to open the door first time because he had taken music room’s key by mistake. So he had to go back to the staff room again, to get the correct key. After he opened the door, he found 3 models, which were made for next weeks’ competition, were broken.

Ten minutes later, Yuuya Hamada also came to the club room. He’d never been to the club room in the morning, but he wanted to modify his model on that day. Hamada told the club leader he left just before Satoshi yesterday, and Satoshi told Hamada that he’s gonna stay longer and would lock the door when he leave..

Therefore, the other members suspected Satoshi broke the 3 models, because he was the last one to leave and locked the door. But according to Satoshi, he locked it on that day just in case someone else came in and broke the models by mistake.

After Houtarou had been briefed with the incident, he pondered for a while.

 “Wrong key……” Houtarou whispered.

“Oh, that,” Satoshi explained. “The Handicraft Club room’s key and music room’s key are both kept in the staff room, and they hung next to each other. The two keys look very similar, so students took the wrong key carelessly time to time. ”

“I see …....” Houtarou started to play with his fringe. That’s the look he gave when he had made some sort of deduction. Then he said it calmly. “I think I know who broke the models.”

“Really!?” Chitanda opened her eyes even bigger and her voice was full of excitement.

Satoshi and Mayaka were also surprised with Houtarou for being able to find the answer so quickly. “Tell us!” They said at same time.

“Ok…. Let’s start with how the person did it.”

“The person went into the Handicraft club with the key before the club leader arrived, and locked the door from inside, then broke the models. The person has already placed the music room’s key where Handicraft Club room’s key is usually hung beforehand. So that even if the club leader came earlier than the person expected, the club leader had to go back to the staff room to get the correct key after he couldn’t open the door with the key he had.”

“After the club leader headed to the staff room upstairs, the person just ran to the staff room using the stairs on the other side. Then hung the Handicraft club room’s key to the right place before the club leader arrived at the staff room.”

Houtarou took a deep breath after he spoken so much words.

“Is it just that simple?” Satoshi was surprised with the simple method that he didn’t know if it could be called a trick.

“Yes, it’s simple.” replied Houtarou. “I think the person didn’t have much time to think about a complicated trick.”

“Satoshi, you said the Handicraft club doesn’t usually lock the door, right? Which means only the person who knew the door had been locked can do it, and that would be...” Houtarou paused for a second and continued. “Yuuya Hamada.”

“It’s him!?” Satoshi looked at Houtarou surprisedly.

“He’d never been to the Handicraft club room in the morning except that day. I don’t think it’s a coincidence. Also, if a person caused an incident, he must be curious about it and want to go back to the scene. Don’t you think?” Hourarou looked back and explained further.

“That’s enough, Houtarou.” Satoshi was smiling, but his voice was deeper than usual. “Let me take care of it from here.”

Satoshi then turned around, “Thank you very much! Mayaka, Chitanda-san.” He’s voice had returned to its usual cheerful tone. He gave them a big smile then left them.  

  

=========== 3 days later ==========

Houtarou met Satoshi on the way to school, and asked him how it went with Hamada.

“I confronted Hamada with the incident, and he admitted it. Do you know what he said?”

Houtarou kept silent, and Satoshi took it as his cue to continue.

“He said he did it because he heard some rumors about our Classic Literature Club that we’re good at solving mystery. And he just wanted to know the truth of the rumor.” Satoshi shrugged helplessly.

“Afterwards, he told the club leader that he broke the models by ACCIDENT. And now, he’s helping us with fixing the models. I think the club leader and the other member will forgive him since they don’t know the truth.”

“Is that alright with you?” Houtarou asked.

Satoshi pondered for a while.

“I think he’s not that bad after all. He’s just, you might say, too naughty” Satoshi shrugged his shoulder. “He’s really conscientious when he’s fixing the models.”

“We all have different sides. We all have some dark, evil side in us, but at the same time, we also have bright and good sides. Humans are colorful, aren’t we?” Satoshi said it in his usual big smile.

Houtarou looked at Satoshi and thought, did Satoshi also use his dark side when he confronted Hamada?

Suddenly, Satoshi leaned forward towards Houtarou.

“Houtarou, I want to thank you for helping me this time.”

“I’m very happy to have you as my friend!”

END

Jakyung's final fan fiction

 Eric said to himself ‘I have been waiting for days to say to her how much I loved her. Every night I closed my eyes her thoughts and face drift in my imagination. I have never felt like this before. A rush to meet her every moment, a need to hug her and tell her how much I love her. She is the best thing that has ever happened to me. Whenever I see her ever smiling face I feel as if the world is completely devoid of problems and worries. The entire world melts, and drifts into her’ Eric kept saying to himself ‘I want to make this special! I want to make it the best moment of my life’. He pulled out the diamond studded ring given to him by his mother. “Mom would have been so proud had she been alive to see this day. This is the same ring that dad had proposed mom with. It is special day in my life.. A big day and hope everything goes well.” Saying this he looked into mother’s portrait and said “Mom bless me...and hope all goes well today...”

  

 Under the soothing moonlit sky he approached outside the beach house. It was a wonderful calm night. The sea was calm and the sky was studded with stars. He looked at his favourite constellation at blinked... “Surprise..Surprise...”

 As expected he found Ariel sitting in the beach with the waves washing her feet. She looked cherubic as if God has blessed her in all his true form. Her hair was dangling on her shoulders, her eyes bright as if they had the power to light the darkest corners of the earth. He walked towards Ariel and said... “Do you miss me as much as I miss you..?” Ariel replied. “I miss you every moment. Never a second passed in the day when your thought does not cross my mind. Eric, let us take a walk on the beach. Look at the sea, how serene and calm it looks. Look at the moon just about to dip into the ocean floor. Hold my hands let us take a walk”

 Saying this they walked on the sand, with the soft mud brushing on their foot. The soft cold water is cleaning their feet. “Catch me Eric~ catch me.” Saying this Ariel ran on the beach. Eric started running after her. “Steady! steady Ariel. I will get hold you~”. He also ran after her. Sometimes they caught each other. Sometimes they hugged and then they started running again.

 Running for a while they entered into a woody forested area close to the beach. “I love this place” said Ariel and then rushed into the forest. “Careful Ariel, you will trip. Be careful~!” Just as he said Ariel got caught in one of the roots of a large tree and went flying into the air and crashed.

 Eric ran towards her shouting “Oh my God what have you done to yourself. You are bleeding!! Can you hear me..? Ariel Please open your eyes!!! open your eyes..” saying this he held Ariel’s head in his hand and started crying. She had a cut on her forehead and was bleeding. Eric then said “I am madly in love with you Ariel, Please don’t leave me anywhere.. I would become lonely without you... Open your eyes Ariel... Open your eyes..” He took a small handkerchief from his pocket and tied it on her head. Ariel then opened her eyes. “Eric, I love you too...” Both of them kissed. A long long passionate kiss.

“Eric I am not leaving you anywhere. I continue to eat your head as I always have been able to. What would I do without you? Who would bear my nonsense hysterical stories .Who else would laugh at my silly jokes and eat all the stupid things I cook. We will grow old together, have kids, play with them and watch them lead a happy wonderful life. Don’t you even dare to leave me alone...”

 Tears swelled up into Eric’s eyes. He has never felt love and affection life this before. Holding her close to his body he asked with the ring in his hand he asked. “I have been in love with you, since the time I saw you. Somehow I feel there isn’t anyone else in this world with whom I would be happy... So foolishly in love with. No one in this entire world could understand and know me better as you know me. Your jokes however silly are always adorable. Your anger and sulking however stupid makes you look even more attractive. The love I feel for you is something, however it is hard to express even I’m really trying to... Please marry me Ariel and make happy. I promise to take care of you every time, every moment and to be with you always.. Marry me Ariel! Please marry me...!”

 Both looked into each other’s eyes, then Ariel put her hand forward. “Eric this ring looks so good on me. Thanks for being there for me.” They both kissed.