Background: The Little Mermaid lives in an underwater kingdom with her father, the sea
king.
One day, little mermaid listens longingly to their various descriptions of the surface and of human beings.
One day, little mermaid listens longingly to their various descriptions of the surface and of human beings.
After that The Little Mermaid drinks the potion and meets the prince, who is attracted to her beauty and grace even though she is mute. Most of all he likes to see her dance and she dances for him despite her excruciating pain.
When the prince's father orders his son to marry the neighboring king's daughter, the prince tells the Little Mermaid he will not because he does not love the princess.
He goes on to say he can only love the young woman from the temple, who he believes rescued him. It turns out that the princess is the temple girl, who had been sent to the temple to be educated. The prince loves her and the wedding is announced.
<The prince and princess marry, and the Little Mermaid's heart breaks. She thinks of all that she has given up and of all the pain she has suffered. She despairs, thinking of the death that awaits her, but before dawn, her sisters bring her a knife that the Sea Witch has given them in exchange for their long hair. If the Little Mermaid slays the prince with the knife and lets his blood drip on her feet, she will become a mermaid again, all her suffering will end and she will live out her full life.
The Little Mermaid cannot bring herself to kill the sleeping prince lying with his bride and as dawn breaks she throws herself into the sea. Her body dissolves into foam, but instead of ceasing to exist, she feels the warmth of the sun; she has turned into a spirit, a daughter of the air.
The other daughters of the air tell her she has become like them because she strove with all her heart to gain an eternal soul.>
I'm going to change < > this part to become a happy ending.
Setting: outside the beach house, beach and woody forested area.
Character: Eric and Ariel
* Eric : Prince of a seaside kingdom, Eric had been searching for his true love before an accident led to his rescue by Ariel.
* Ariel : Ariel is the youngest of seven daughters. She is very interested in human things, to the annoyance of her father. Ariel falls in love with, Prince Eric, giving up her mermaid form.
any thoughts about your fan fiction?
ReplyDeleteA very good choice of original series, since the setting is not complicate and it is a well known story. I would like to see their happy ending. ^^;
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DeleteYes! Thanks for the comments:)
DeleteI'm trying to write simply and easily.
My final one is going to be a romantic love story!
I love reading disney fanfictions, looking forward to the final! :-) Good luck
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DeleteThanks for the comment:)
DeleteWhich story do you like the most?
I'm really trying to write it romantically~BUT it quite difficult..
Anyway I'm also looking forward to see yours!
hard to read so can you change the style of penmanship? story is interesting and i like the disney story. are you going to just change the story with happy ending ? or you also going to mix with other story ? look forward to read the final fan fiction. ^^
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice:) I'll change it!
DeleteActually I'm not going to mix with other story.. I didn't think about that... I've already wrote my final one so maybe I may have difficulty with that:( Anyway thanks! I'm also looking forward to see yours!!
Over 800.. It's nearly 1000words. I will try to shorten the story. My final one is going to be a happy ending. The prince and Ariel get married. Mood of the story will be very sugary which is most boys don't like...
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